Thursday, June 10, 2010

Any last critiques please!

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I hope I've made fixes on everything that people have noticed so far, if you have any other thoughts on this animation please let me know! Thanks!

5 comments:

TimH said...

the only major thing that really stands out to me still is the jump at the end. I understand that when she jumps she is supposed to be receding in space, but when she finishes the jump it looks more like she is being pulled over rather than falling naturally with gravity.

Jocelyn said...

Wow, you're totally right. Thanks! I'll fix that today.

Chelsea Stebar said...

Geez, Jocelyn, this is amazing. The only thing I noticed is basically what Tim said. That jump at the end just feels floaty, like she's defying gravity and just hanging in the air too long or something...

cguidice said...

Hi Jocleyn! You stopped by my studio with your Mom for a life drawing class at the Picker Building in Nashua. I'm having a workshop on the last Saturday of January and wanted to invite you and your Mom. This is the only contact info I have... please respond to cguidice@cmga.com. Thanks!!!

benjamin trobat -cartoonist- said...

great blog